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GREAT, your story is great. I' m reading BOOK D and I don' t know how to
survive when I'll finish it. Please continue to make us dream.
Thank you
Hi! I'm Anthony. I have just read the HARD KOR and finished Book A. I found
that the writing being very good. Nice job! But I have some doubts about the
naming of characters. In Book A, Ayukawa Madoka addressed Kasuga Kyosuke
sometimes as Kyosuke, while sometimes as Kasuga! Also, I think in some part
you mixed up the family name and given name: Kasuga is the family name while
Kyosuke being the given name. As a result, Ayukawa Madoka calls Kyosuke as
"Kasuga-kun" in school lives as she regard him as either social equal or
inferior. At the same time, Kyosuke named she as Ayukawa (calling the family
name) because she is his angel and he respect her but at the same time he was
reluctant to address formally as Ayukawa-san. Until they have sex, they
changed calling each other as Kyosuke and Madoka.
That's only my viewpoint. Anyway, you've done a good job. Keep it up!.
I have recently completed your Hard KOR series in its entirety and I
must say I am very impressed with it. I especially enjoyed some of the
interesting twists and turns of the plot and scenarios, they were a
refreshing change from some other Fics that I have read from the KOR
continuum that make light of the love triangle. In that I think you
made some very progressive slides. I am writing to inquire on the
development of the Third Book in the series, I hope that it is
progressing well. I am a very amateur writer myself, and if you would
like I could be one of you beta readers. For the moment I have not had
the courage to publish any of my works but am most happy to help other
more prolific writers. In any case, I commend your work on the Hard KOR
series and look forward to seeing its completion.
Thanks,
Being a brand new fan to KOR (I just found out about it less than 6 months
ago...) I am trying to read as much as possible about it. I just spend two
days (hours and hours off and on) reading and really enjoying your FanFic and
hope you someday get the chance to finish it. You seem to be able to capture
the emotion of the characters very well. I hate to admit it, but at one point
in Book A, I found myself trying to hold back tears... When Hikaru was thinking
about Yuusaku, and visiting his grave. I like the way you are playing Ryusei
against Hikaru, and want to see how it comes out. I noticed the last date was
Sep 96, so you must be pretty busy, and I can certainly understand that. Well,
good luck with it. Thanks for writing it.
Hi! I'm an Italian Student that , like you , love KOR .
Few days ago I Have found on the net your works and I think that are
fantastic!!
I start to read Book A , like you suggest, but I espected B7 yet!!
Now I'll try to persuade all my friends that , like me , love Kor , to read
your Books.
See you soon on the net in the hope that in Italy someone publishing
the
Shin KOR I & II.
The Magic Dan
Hello. After I did the obligatory signing of the guestbook, I decided
to E mail you directly. Just wanted to make sure you knew how impressed
I am with your story. I await the continuing of it soon. It is a grand
mystery, and I can't wait to see its resolution. I didn't really know
much about KOR, except what I saw in the OAV series. However, you do a
good job of developing the characters so that you don't need to have
much of a background on them. Anyway, keep up the good work.
Sincerely,
Robert
Just read got its good. I'm starting to get some ideas on just
who Ryusei really is based on what currently happening in the
Prelude chapters.
The story's coming along pretty nicely and I have two corrections
for you. It has to do with your use of honorifics (-san) in the fic.
I am not very good with Japanese but all the language books I have
detail the proper use of honorifics in Japanese. And with the family
name of Kyousuke.
i read book A it kicked ass!, was shin-kor the book before it, because id like
to read
it too (iv already got the b1 and b2), and also do you do all that art work
your good i
write and draw anime too, and why do you conciel your name?
I've just begun to read your fanfic, but I am already very impressed with
your handling of the characters, and the fact that you convey the
original feeling of one of my favorite anime series excellently.
I'll be back to comment further once I've had a chance to read what
you've written up until now. Btw, thanks for posting your announcement
of chapter seven to raas, or I would never have found your story.
Hi Rob,
I just read your first Ch. 9 preview with the "kung fu movie dream".
I just had to say that scarily enough there really is a martial
art exactly like the one practiced by Kid Kazuya. It's called
baguazhang or pa kua chang (depending on whether you use Pinyin
or Wade Giles romanization) which means "8 Trigrams Palm". The
8 Trigrams is a reference to the I-Ching. The footwork is designed
to quickly place the pa kua chang fighter behind his opponent.
Legendary pa kua masters like Cheng Ting Hua and Dong Hai Chuan
were notorious for being impossible to hit as they always ended
up behind their opponent - not to mention they were fast as hell!
Anyway, its cool to read about the use of pa kua chang in a fanfic.
Some Comments by guestbook
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Date: Fri, 10 Dec 1999 09:06:06 +0100
From: Tobia Bearzotti
Subject: KOR fanfiction
Date: 17 Mar 1999 14:33:49 -0000
From: yuen_anthony@hongkong.com
Subject: Hard |
Anthony Yuen
Hong Kong
Neal L.
Date: Tue, 05 May 1998 18:09:21 PDT
Subject: Hard KOR Series
Neal Leyendecker
Date: Tue, 9 Dec 1997 01:01:06 -0600
From: Derek Moyes
Subject: Hard KOR
Date: Sat, 08 Feb 1997 03:27:07 +0100
From: Cozzella Lorenzo
Subject: KOR Fanfiction
Date: Wed, 5 Feb 1997 01:12:25 -0500
From: Robert Hadley
Subject: fan/author
Date: Sun, 15 Sep 1996 01:50:43 +0800
From: kasuga@mnl.sequel.net
To: rk@CSUA.Berkeley.EDU
Subject: HardKORB3
Date: Wed, 11 Sep 1996 07:36:41 -0400
From: Ricky DiMarco
To: rk@ucsee.EECS.Berkeley.EDU
Cc: rickyd@hhs.net
Subject: hey
Name: Bjvrn Sjvberg
Date: Jun 30, 1996
Subject: the book !
I like what u are doing ... its a fine story : )
Name: David A. Miller
Date: Jun 24, 1996
Subject: Orange Road Stories
Zembyaku
I think it's pretty neat what you're doing.
Name:Johnd
Date: Feb 20, 1996
Subject: Hard Kor
Name:Paolo Valladolid
Date:Feb 13, 1996
Subject: Chapter 9 preview
Name: Belinda Bertolo
Website:
Referred by: Net Search
From: Udine (Italy)
Time: 1997-04-08 05:53:00
Comments: This site is very marvelous !!!
Name: Alejandro Sevilla
Website:
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: Mexico
Time: 1997-03-27 21:40:00
Comments: Gambatte Robert!
And to think that all this started 13 years ago with a guy
in japan doodling something in a sheet of paper.
And now the story have a life of its own, and I'm so glad to
see there's people in this world who doesn't want the magic
to end.
Arigatou Robert
Name: Manon TAM
Website: Manon's Homepage
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: Hong Kong <--> UK
Time: 1997-03-25 15:26:00
Comments: It is a really nice homepage. I love it~^.^~
Name: Paul Van
Website:
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: California
Time: 1997-03-18 17:41:00
Comments: Very Good.
Name: Mr. Da Cider
Website: Mai-kun's Anime
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: Honolulu, HI
Time: 1997-03-14 19:10:00
Comments: The woman I love is a jealous one, but when she smiles, I feel at best.
Wow, cool stuff you got here especially the story lines. Gambatte and see you around.
Ja ne mina-san!!!! Genki genki no?
Name: JOHN FREEMAN
Website:
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: az.
Time: 1997-03-12 17:24:00
Comments: i just got here, have not read anything yet.
Name: Petchai Wangdee
Website:
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: Thailand
Time: 1997-03-05 21:29:00
Comments: Hello
Name: Delphina Chue
Website:
Referred by: From Geocities
From: Hong Kong
Time: 1997-03-05 12:56:00
Comments: It's really great to have so many web pages about KOR. But
I am kind of confused of how many different series of KOR
are there totally. So there is KOR(the very first one),
KOR2(where Kazuya is the protagonist, and KOC. I wonder if
that's all the different series. So I think the web page
would be more fantastic if you can actually list those series
in chronological order.
Name: Ken Ip
Website:
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: San Diego, Ca
Time: 1997-03-02 00:11:00
Comments: This is KOR webpage is the best I've seen! Though I love everything about KOR, I have to confess that i know very little. Your web page however seems very thorough and has opened open a new door into the world of KOR for me. My compliments and thanks to you.
Name: Lorenzo Cozzella
Website:
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: Italy
Time: 1997-02-18 14:13:00
Comments: Could I not sign your guestbook Rob?
See you soon on the net.
From your italian friend
Name: Mr. Da Cider
Website: Anime in Hawaii
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: Doki Doki Space
Time: 1997-02-12 17:47:00
Comments: Godai:the woman i love is a jealous one, but when she smiles, i feel at best.
Name: Johan Breukelaar
Website:
Referred by: Net Search
From: Weesp, The Netherlands
Time: 1997-02-10 03:46:00
Comments: WoW, really nice page!
Name: MARSHALL L.CARTER III
Website:
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: WILLIAMSTOWN,N.J.
Time: 1997-02-06 20:00:00
Comments: JAPANIMATION IS THE GREATEST STUFF ON EARTH...WELL,CLOSE
TO IT! BEEN LOVING IT FOR ABOUT 30 YEARS.I GRADUATED TO
THE MORE EXPLICIT STUFF WITH GREAT STORIES AS WELL AS
KNOCK-OUT ANIMATION,BUT FINDING MORE IS A HORSE OF A
DIFFERENT COLOR. LET ME KNOW IF YOU HAVE ANY SUGGESTIONS!
Name: Robert Hadley
Website: Phillip Masters Anime Fanfic
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: Ohio, USA
Time: 1997-02-04 22:03:00
Comments: I am an author in search of fanfic's to read. Here I have
stumbled upon a very well written one. It is always a
pleasure to see people with talent on the net. I await the
continuation of your story. KOR is not one of my
favorites, yet I enjoyed the OAV's to no end. I have no
ready access to the original TV series, and wouldn't be
able to understand it if it wasn't fansubbed or something.
I look forward to a day when we will not be separated by
language barriers, and can enjoy anime (or Hollywood films
in the case of the Japanese) anytime and anywhere we feel
like watching/reading it.
Name:Colin
Wahlert
Name: Stephen Opipari
Website:
Referred by: Just Surfed On In!
From: Michigan
Time: 1997-01-20 07:44:00
Comments: Very, very slick. I admire the time that you put into
the writing. The story and characters are vey well fleshed
out. I am looking forward to new chapters.
Email:xl3r2@rockpile.com
Date:Sunday - 5/May/96 - 7:55:39
Homepage:XL3R2 The Official Home
Page: Akane Club & Anime Link List
Referred from:Just
Surfed On In!
Comments: There's so much KOR fanfiction on the
web; when am I going
to have time to read it all? Oh well, the more
the
merrier, right?
Name:Jack Scheirer
Email:dusty@nwsrs.att.com
Date:Tuesday - 9/Apr/96 - 14:03:01
Homepage:http://
Referred from:Just Surfed On In!
Comments: Hey dere, Ho dere....
Yes someone is reading
your stories.
'though it may take me a few days to get
to them all.
Name:Kenigsberg
William
Email:kenigsbe@poly.polytechnique.fr
Date:Monday - 8/Apr/96 - 5:35:56
Homepage:http://
Referred from :Just Surfed On In!
Comments: Thank you for write stories about our beloved KOR
characters. And the skill you show honor you. I must admit that I check my
browser almost every day to see if the new chapter is on the Web.
Again Do mou Arigato.
Ittekimasu.
Ken.
Name:Jerry Kim
Email:jkim11@orion.it.luc.edu
Date:Thursday - 4/Apr/96 - 13:28:28
Homepage:Jerry's Page thingy...< br>
Referred from:Just Surfed On In!
Comments: GREAT story!
I especially liked the ending....well...almost...
I woulda thought
that Madoka would have said something a
little different, but hey!
it's still a GREAT story. Glad
to see that at least you kept true to
the basic plot as
much as possible. Keep it up, aiight? laters
Name:Marc DURANTEZ
Email:durantez@poly.polytechnique.fr
Date:Saturday - 30/Mar/96 - 10:30:24
Referred from:Just
Surfed On In!
Comments: It i s a pleasure to found pages like
this one.
I hope you will continue to write this fan-fiction,
so I will still have good reasons to delay my homework!
Sorede
ganbatte kudasai !
Marc
Name:Shy guy
Email:none
Date:Friday - 29/Mar/96 -
9:11:00
Homepage:http://none
Referred from:Just Surfed On In!
Comme nts: I'm just
calling in from a browser. I just wanted to
congratulate you on your
efforts in writing these stories!
Your story connotes a sense of
well being and sensibility
to the KOR characters. Here, it seems the
roles for Hikaru
and Kysuke are reversed. Now Hikarus is the
indecisive one,
not knowing who she can love or trust at all.
Kysouke, on the
other hand, seems to have his goals set. Madoka is
protrayed
in her usual light as a mysterious super girl with super
talents!
And I love how you are spinning the overlapping triangles
around. And last, I am intrigued by the suspense surrounding the new
characters, especially Ryosei(?) . A strange person of
demonic
thoughts who a lways keeps his face hidden and his past locked up.
I
can't wait to find out more about him! In all, a very sound,
well-written piece of fanfic. Keep up the good work!
Name:Julthep Nandakwang
Email:julthep@crsc.kmitl.ac.th
Date:Friday - 29/Mar/96 - 4:16:31
Homepage:Julthep Nandakwa ng's Home
Page
Referred from:Just Surfed On In!
Comments:
Nice!
Name:Ed Bushman
Email:emb1701@cris.com
Date:Monday -
25/Mar/96 - 20:59:14
Homepage:none
Referred from:Net Search
Comments: Thanks
Name:Marvin Peace
Email:dp1_marvin_peace@yokipc-emh1.navy.mil
Date:Tuesday - 19/Mar/96 - 22:03:52
Homepage:http://
Re ferred from:Net Search
Comments: Great story, rather like the way it is currently going.
Can't wait to see what happens.
Name:Robert Kwong
Email:rk@ucsee.eecs.berkeley.edu
Date:Tuesday - 19/Mar/96 - 16:05:21
Homepage:Hard KOR ver
2.0
Referred from:Just Surfed On In!
Comments:
This is a test of the free guestbook service. Sorry for
the
delay. Thanks for being patient! I appreciate the
effort you're going
through to submit some fee dback to me.
Now you're welcome to
flame my stories 24hrs a day ;)
Happy H A R D |< O R!
Rob
Kwong 3-19-96
Total:13 guests